Historical Fantasy

Review: Throne of Jade

Cover of the book, featuring a white dragon with massive wings and whiskers like a Chinese dragon high in the sky over a Chinese padoga.

Title: Throne of Jade

Series: Temeraire #2

Author: Naomi Novik

Genre: Historical Fantasy

Trigger Warnings: Death, blood, injury, animal death, animal injury, war, misogyny, sexism, xenophobia

Spoiler Warning: This book is second in a series, and reading beyond this point will expose you to spoilers of the first book, His Majesty’s Dragon.

Back Cover:

When Britain intercepted a French ship and its precious cargo–an unhatched dragon’s egg–Captain Will Laurence of HMS Reliant unexpectedly became master and commander of the noble dragon he named Temeraire. As new recruits in Britain’s Aerial Corps, man and dragon soon proved their mettle in daring combat against Napoleon Bonaparte’s invading forces.

Now China has discovered that its rare gift, intended for Napoleon, has fallen into British hands–and an angry Chinese delegation vows to reclaim the remarkable beast. A reluctant Laurence has no choice but to take Temeraire back to China–a long voyage fraught with peril, intrigue, and the untold terrors of the deep. Yet once the pair reaches the court of the Chinese emperor, even more shocking discoveries and darker dangers await.

Review:

I enjoyed His Majesty’s Dragon more than I expected to. I am not much for historical fiction, especially military historical fiction, even if it does have dragons, and I was delighted by how much I enjoyed the relationship between proper gentleman William Lawrence and smart but young dragon Temeraire. I had pretty high hopes for the second book.

Throne of Jade, though, was … rough.

I love the ideas at play. It’s fascinating to see how dragons – the massive variety, large enough to be ridden by a whole crew of men – fit into society in the early 1800s. But Throne of Jade is weirdly plotted and weirdly paced. Admittedly, much of the story is spent on a long sea voyage and there are only so many ways to make a long sea voyage interesting. But someone keeps trying to assassinate Lawrence, and besides a little conjecture, nobody really bothers to try and figure out who or why. There is someone powerful trying to kill him, there are four different attempts (several of which result in injury), and it’s just kinda … ignored? And then that whole attempted assassination plot thread is resolved too easily and entirely by accident – the culprit is revealed unintentionally while the characters are working on something else entirely.

The pacing here is so weird that I did not recognize the climax was even the climax. Part of that could be because there isn’t really one overarching plot in this book. There’s a bunch of smaller plots that overlap in parts, but nothing that could be called The Plot, and so no main thing to be finally resolved in a climactic scene. Because of that, it also seems much shorter than it is. There are a lot of words, but it says little and not much happens.

This book overall had less of what I really loved about the first one. There was less action (actually next to no action), and less of the Lawrence/Temeraire dynamic that I loved so much. There was less Temeraire in general, actually, and less of him being awesome and exceptional. (China was a really cool setting, but it took away much of Temeraire’s awesomeness since Celestial dragons are rare but not unknown in China.) This book was more about Lawrence – his fears, insecurities, and jealousies. It made for an okay story, but it set him and Temeraire at odds sometimes when I really loved seeing them work as a team.

I am really not sure what Throne of Jade is supposed to be, and it feels like the book itself isn’t sure either. It seems like in the next book things will be pretty much back to normal, so I’m not even sure what the point of this was – unless the events at the end of this will come back and be important later in the series. Overall, I’m going to chalk this up to growing pains. The Temeraire series are Naomi’s first books, and sequels are hard. I’m going to keep reading and I expect book three will be better.

The Temeraire series:

  1. His Majesty’s Dragon
  2. Throne of Jade
  3. Black Powder War
  4. Empire of Ivory
  5. Victory of Eagles
  6. Tongues of Serpents
  7. Crucible of Gold
  8. Blood of Tyrants
  9. League of Dragons
Historical Fantasy

Review: His Majesty’s Dragon

Cover of the book, featuring a long gray dragon with huge wings and whiskers like a Chinese dragon flying high above a dark sea - there is a ship with sails in the distance.

Title: His Majesty’s Dragon

Series: Temeraire #1

Author: Naomi Novik

Genre: Historical Fantasy

Trigger Warnings: Sexism (brief), injury, blood, death, death of animals, war, execution, sexual content (mentions), animal cruelty/neglect

Back Cover:

Aerial combat brings a thrilling new dimension to the Napoleonic Wars as valiant warriors ride mighty fighting dragons, bred for size or speed.

When HMS Reliant captures a French frigate and seizes the precious cargo, an unhatched dragon egg, fate sweeps Captain Will Laurence from his seafaring life into an uncertain future – and an unexpected kinship with a most extraordinary creature. Thrust into the rarified world of the Aerial Corps as master of the dragon Temeraire, he will face a crash course in the daring tactics of airborne battle. For as France’s own dragon-borne forces rally to breach British soil in Bonaparte’s boldest gambit, Laurence and Temeraire must soar into their own baptism of fire.

Review:

I had actually looked at this book a year or two ago and decided that I really wasn’t interested. Dragons are cool and historical fantasy can be good, but I’m not interested in military fiction at all, and the Napoleonic Wars are not a historical period I particularly care about. Then I started looking to see what books my library had by Naomi Novik (my surprise favorite author of last year) and discovered that she wrote this series. So I had to give it a shot anyway.

And surprisingly (though less surprisingly considering the author), it was very good.

Even though this is about a British Navy officer forced to switch to the airborne division after he ended up bonded with a dragon, it’s not really about the military. It’s not even about the war against Napoleon that Lawrence and Temeraire are training to fight. It’s about Lawrence, honorable and disciplined military officer and perfect 1800s gentleman, and Temeraire, very young but blazingly intelligent, and the relationship between them.

Considering Lawrence and Temeraire don’t see a single battle until 63% of the way through the book, this story has no right to be as interesting as it is. It’s mostly about training, relationships, culture shock, strategy, and a not insubstantial amount of politics. And yet I enjoyed every minute of it.

I really enjoyed the clash between Lawrence’s strict Navy background and clear social dynamics from being raised as nobility and the informality and social upending of the Aerial Corps. I also enjoyed the relationships. Not just between Lawrence and Temeraire (although that was a spectacular friendship), but between our human and dragon protagonists and the other humans and dragons in the Aerial Corps.

This book is just plain awesome. There’s dragons, of course, which are always epic, but there’s also a strong emotional element to the story. It has ups and downs, sadness and joy, and some great Epic Battle Feelings in the climax. Overall, this is a fantastic book (not that I expected any less from Naomi Novik), and I am definitely reading the rest of the series.

The Temeraire series:

  1. His Majesty’s Dragon
  2. Throne of Jade
  3. Black Powder War
  4. Empire of Ivory
  5. Victory of Eagles
  6. Tongues of Serpents
  7. Crucible of Gold
  8. Blood of Tyrants
  9. League of Dragons